English Report Correction

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Table of Contents

1.        Introduction        

2.        Language        

2.1        Grammar        

2.1.1        Tenses        

2.1.2        Punctuation        

2.1.3        Sentence structure        

2.2        Expressions        

2.2.1        Words missing        

2.2.2        Wording        

2.2.3        Adverbs        

2.2.4        Use of Articles        

2.2.5        Prepositions        

2.2.6        Register        

2.2.7        American English vs. British English        

2.2.8        Repetition of content        

3.        Structure        

3.1        Executive Summary        

3.2        Introduction        

3.3        Background Information        

3.4        Methodology        

3.5        Analysis of research findings        

3.6        Conclusion        

3.7        Recommendation        

3.8        Inconsistency of content        

4.        Sections        

5.        Sourcing        

5.1        Page number missing        

5.2        Source is missing        

5.3        Bibliography        

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1. Introduction

The following report is an analysis of an IBS graduation project. The key elements addressed in this report are language, structure, sections, and sourcing/ referencing. All parts have been checked individually and were divided into sub-categories according to the major problems in each particular section. Each remark is supported by at least two examples and a recommendation on how to improve the particular problem.