Sentence Revision Assignment 1

EDIT THE FOLLOWING SENTENCES, MARKING MISTAKES WITH SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION [INDICATE CHANGES IN BRACKETED ALL CAPS].  THE FIRST ONE HAS BEEN COMPLETED FOR YOU AS A GUIDE.  BE SURE TO SAVE YOUR CHANGES AND INCLUDE YOUR NAME ON YOUR WORD DOCUMENT.  I HIGHLY ENCOURAGE YOU TO REVIEW THE GRAMMAR DIAGNOSTIC ANSWER KEY BEFORE COMPLETING THIS ASSIGNMENT.

DUE: MONDAY, JULY 13, 2015, 9:00 A.M. (VIA DROP BOX)

1. To sucede [SUCCEED] in today[‘]s high-tech bus[I]ness world[,] you need highly[DELETE -] developed communication skills.

1. You especially need writing [WRITING] and grammer [GRAMMAR] skills, [DELETE ,] because employs [EMPLOYEES] spend 60% of there [THEIR] time processing documents.

1. One organization paid three thousand dollars [$3,000] each for twelve employes [EMPLOYEES] to attend a 1 [ONE] week work shop in communication training.

1. My coworker and me [I] was [WERE] surprised [SURPRISED] to learn that more information has been produced in the last thirty years then [THAN] in the previous five thousand [5,000] years.

1. If you work in a [AN] office with open cubicles[,] it[‘]s rude to listen to web radio[,] streaming audio[,] or other multimedia, [DELETE ,] without headphones.

1. When making a decision[,] you should gather information, [DELETE ,] and then weigh the advantages and disadvantage of each alternative.

1. If you are defining communication[,] for example, a principle element are [IS] the transmission [TRANSMISSION] of information [INFORMATION] and meaning.

1. Ms[.] Johnson has 3 [THREE] messages to send immediately,[;] consequently she choose [CHOSE] e-mail because it was definitely [DEFINITELY] the most [DELETE most] fastest communication channel.

1. 5 [FIVE] elements that make up your frame of reference are the following[:] Experience, Education, [LOWER CASE] Culture [LOWER CASE] , Expectations [LOWER CASE] [,] and Personality [LOWER CASE] .

1. Just between you and I [ME]; [,] I’m sure our company President [LOWER CASE] thinks that honest[Y] and integrity are more important then [THAN] increase[D OR INCREASING] profits.