Capital Punishment

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• Capital punishment is the same as “death sentence”
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Capital punishment is more cost-effective than lifetime incarceration.

Capital punishment, in simple terms^[a], is a death penalty. It is where a convicted person is sanctioned to be put to death by the government through the courts for serious crimes such as treason, murder, war crimes, genocide, crimes against humanity and the likes. Lifetime incarceration is a lifetime imprisonment for crimes such as attempted murder, conspiracy to commit murder, drug trafficking, human trafficking and the likes. The convicted person is to remain in prison for the rest of their lives.

It is widely said all over the world that almost every cost-research conducted has proven that lifetime incarceration is more cost-effective than capital punishment. On the contrary, if every other factor, other than the process itself, associated with capital punishment and lifetime incarceration were to be put to consideration, every researcher would come to the same conclusion that capital punishment is far more cost effective than lifetime incarceration. The researches conducted only focused on the processes of the capital punishment and lifetime incarceration.