Could or Could Not Retirement Home Replace a Real Home?

Could or could not retirement home replace a real home?

Essay outline

Introduction

Thesis statement:  Although a lot of families send their parents to the retirement homes as a beneficial effect for the family such as not taking care about old people etc. But, other        families claim it is rude and detrimental to leave them as a retired person.

I. Main idea (Topic sentence): Sheltered housing is an opportunity for being cared and loved. 

A. Supporting idea:  

1. Detail: Elderly people will get support and recover in an environment outside a hospital

2. Detail: Elderly people will not be discriminated as a disable person.

B. Supporting idea:

1. Details:  

2. Examples:

II Main idea (Topic sentence): Retired people have a chance to make new friends at the same age and communicate.

A. Supporting idea:  

1. Detail: Sharing experience, hobbies, interests and non stopping talking improves general spirit.

2. Detail:  They are not feeling lonely as they understand each other emotionally and mutually rather than children do.

B. Supporting idea: It is thanklessly to send parents to retirement homes.

1. Details: Some of retirement homes are in low quality and poor conditions.

2. Examples: In Asia it is taboo to leave parents

III. Main idea (Topic Sentence): Retirement homes, and consequently looking after old people, may differ in different parts of the world.

A. Supporting idea:

1. Detail: All pros’ in Western countries, all cons’ in Asian countries.

2. Detail: Retired people are limited in liberties.

B. Supporting idea:  

1. Details:

2. Examples:

IV. Conclusion

The problem of our society is that we can not take care  of everyone who belongs to us. Therefore, we face with the question ‘ could or not retirement home replace a real home’ four our lovely parents. Additionally, not every family even provide a home for their parents, consequently they become homeless. That is why they might choose living in retirement home rather than outside, but anyhow for them it feels may be the same as living outside and feeling lonely, nevertheless the only thing is that they have at least a roof over the head. This essential problem is increasing year to year. Also, old people are very sensitive persons and they feel everything like children do, for instance, they can be ill if they don’t feel lovely atmosphere at home, and as a result children send them to retirement homes. However, sometimes it is better to change the daily routine at home and spend time with parents, in order to understand feelings of parents. Although a lot of families send their parents to the retirement homes as a beneficial effect for the family such as not taking care about old people etc. But, other        families claim it is rude and detrimental to leave them as a retired person.