Animal Farm

Both the movie and book of animal farm differ greatly, the movie has extended the main events from the book and

told them in a different light, and the movie has created or changed the personalities of the main characters.

In the book the story starts of explaining the conditions of the farm, then it moves onto Farmer Jones closing the

barn drunk and forgetting to lock the gate, which allows animals to to come out and have their meeting with Old Major.

in the movie farm Jones has a party and invites farmers from the bordering farms. Mr P gets drunk and passes out

leaving his wife alone with farmer Jones. She winds up in his bed and the two sleep together. Farmer Jones is then

interrupted by the animals singing their "theme song," Breasts of England. He get up and shoots a gun to scare the

animals but he just ends up killing Old Major

comments

compliments: i like how you are giving a little bit of a summary as you write your essay =o) i also liked how you contrast them on the spot and show the differences all together great organization =o)

suggestions: i suggest you add a lot more to your essay and write more about it put more information in your essay

corrections: you should check how to spell off and farmer you should write 'off' instead of 'of' and 'farmer' instead of 'farm'